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Version 1 added on 10/09/07 by Oblivion King
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(0) » REPLY «#3. MugglesMan111 
@ 6:51PM 10/09/07
[re: v1] | <comment deleted by mm111> Edited @ 6:55PM 10/09/07 |
@ 6:52PM 10/09/07 (0) » REPLY «#6. VGMaster 
@ 6:53PM 10/09/07
[re: v1] | It's not horrible. Just cut the back BG and maybe make some borders for the screens. Then, try using new fonts. #3, he's made 3 before this. This is his first with a back. |
(0) » REPLY «#7. IceFox @ 6:54PM 10/09/07
[re: v1] | DeathSpawn, help your bro out. It's not that it's awful, it's just that it's not very good (say that with a slow British accent, it sounds ohh so much better). The front is okay but the ESRB and dev logos dont look good. Other than that, it's not that theres anything wrong with it, it's just that it doesn't look good. Bad image choices. The back is not good. The screens are too huge and the font - too basic. Make the screens smaller, add borders, choose a better font and do some more editing on the back. The spine isn't very good, it's just a black bar with a badly cut Halo 3 logo. Hope I helped. Damn, I would have been #2 comment if I wasn't IMing millions of people >_> :P Edited @ 6:55PM 10/09/07 |
(0) » REPLY «#8. MugglesMan111 @ 6:55PM 10/09/07
[re: v1] | oh.......well then...my bad. it could use alot of work but try using better fonts like VG said. p.s. now i feel embarrased :) |
(0) » REPLY «#9. xIAMHUNTERx 
@ 6:55PM 10/09/07
[re: v1] | XD I just realized the MC looks like he's doing a shot put with that plasma grenade. |
(0) » REPLY «#10. Ninjamojo27 
@ 8:36PM 10/09/07
 [re: v1] | Hi Nathan. This box isnt good at all. -The front pic is just a wallpaper, no editing. -Theres no back temp at the top 1/5 |
(0) » REPLY «#11. Tikicobra 
@ 11:14PM 10/09/07
[re: v1] | Holy hell! this is amazing! I can see the effort! The template looks awesome and the logos are cut out so nicely! And the back just blew my mind! OMG! It's such a fresh idea too! I wish there were more Halo 3 boxes! 0/5! +no fav! Work on it... Edited @ 11:14PM 10/09/07 |
(0) » REPLY «#12. Ayron 
@ 11:51AM 10/10/07
[re: v1] | #11, Dude, don't be like that. it makes you look like an ass. anyways, just follow icefox' and ninja's comments. |
(0) » REPLY «#13. Tikicobra @ 12:16PM 10/10/07
[re: v1] | Well I'm not trying to be an ass... I just want to help out without having to act like a major critic. I can tell he didn't put any effort into this and I dont think he should have posted it... |
(0) » REPLY «#14. Ayron @ 12:16PM 10/10/07
[re: v1] | #13, still no need to act sarcastic and better than him. everyone has to start somewhere. |
(0) » REPLY «#15. Vengeance @ 12:18PM 10/10/07
[re: v1] | #14, you realise who this guy is? he's DS's bro, and he really sucks. He's been sucking at boxes for months. I just hope he doesn't make a "Water Wars II". i'd ignore him if i were you. |
(0) » REPLY «#17. Fuzzy_duck @ 9:25PM 10/10/07
[re: v1] | "This Game Has Many New Weapons Such As The Spartan Laser And New Gernades Like The Spike Gernade" ....o_O |
(0) » REPLY «#18. Infamous Stick 
@ 10:52PM 10/10/07
[re: v1] | What got me was the "This online multiplayer has many new features for online play such as the new game type, V.I.P." 1/5 |
(0) » REPLY «#19. Sonic the Hedgehog @ 7:58PM 04/14/08
[re: v1] | Not bad but on the front he should be holding a gun |
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