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Version 2 added on 10/24/07 by frenchboy1
Earlier Versions: Version 1 (10/23/07)
Fav'd By (10): Ervo
Comments
[re: v1] | I think you did a great job, but I just don't like how there is a lot of text at the back. |
[re: v1] | #3, there is a lot of things to say about this beatiful game :D Thanks |
[re: v1] | covers looks good, i like the design around the screenshots but there does seem like a lot of text. |
[re: v1] | There's even more text than in my boxes :o It looks great anyway. Faved. |
[re: v1] | cool, but i don't like what you did to the logo, and there's WWAAYYY to much text, and the font doesn't suit the game, for that matter. |
[re: v1] | and people thought I had too much text? :O |
[re: v1] | I don't mean to be mean, but I'll fav it when theres less text on the back. You practically wrote a book. The point of the game summary is to be quick and concise and to draw the reader and potential buyer in. Otherwise, the box is great. |
[re: v1] | Youre text is a weird font and not very legible either. |
[re: v1] | I'll update it whith less text. Edit : Done, I remove the bottom text. Please leave comments ! Edited @ 6:59AM 10/24/07 |
[re: v2] | make the text bigger so it fills up more of the back and give it a cool font. It's still too long... look at the official back, most summaries are usually like 2 or 3 lines long. |
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[re: v1]
I'm pretty proud of this one ^^