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Version 2 added on 10/24/07 by frenchboy1
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Fav'd By (10): Ervo , skylineGTR , spark7600gs , Destroyer , Lord-E.N.E.R.U , Reza , ..::SamuS::.. , gladden_dude , marcGALAXY [banned], The_French
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(0) » REPLY «#1. frenchboy1 @ 4:46AM 10/23/07
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Finally done :) Please check out the full view and leave comments :D


I'm pretty proud of this one ^^

(0) » REPLY «#2. frenchboy1 @ 6:08AM 10/23/07
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3 favs !!? Thanks ^^

(0) » REPLY «#3. ELCrazy @ 9:31AM 10/23/07
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I think you did a great job, but I just don't like how there is a lot of text at the back.

(0) » REPLY «#4. frenchboy1 @ 9:44AM 10/23/07
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#3, there is a lot of things to say about this beatiful game :D Thanks

(0) » REPLY «#5. EddieEdwards @ 9:44AM 10/23/07
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covers looks good, i like the design around the screenshots but there does seem like a lot of text.

(0) » REPLY «#6. Ervo @ 11:58AM 10/23/07
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There's even more text than in my boxes :o It looks great anyway. Faved.

(0) » REPLY «#7. frenchboy1 @ 11:59AM 10/23/07
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#6, Thanks :D

(0) » REPLY «#8. Vengeance @ 12:25PM 10/23/07
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cool, but i don't like what you did to the logo, and there's WWAAYYY to much text, and the font doesn't suit the game, for that matter.

(0) » REPLY «#9. finalfantaseer22 @ 2:40PM 10/23/07
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and people thought I had too much text? :O

(0) » REPLY «#10. werdney @ 5:53PM 10/23/07
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I don't mean to be mean, but I'll fav it when theres less text on the back. You practically wrote a book. The point of the game summary is to be quick and concise and to draw the reader and potential buyer in. Otherwise, the box is great.

(0) » REPLY «#11. Roboross [banned] @ 7:53PM 10/23/07
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Youre text is a weird font and not very legible either.

(0) » REPLY «#12. E_G @ 11:06PM 10/23/07
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I agree with the criticisms so far, not bad though

(0) » REPLY «#13. frenchboy1 @ 6:35AM 10/24/07
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I'll update it whith less text.

Edit : Done, I remove the bottom text. Please leave comments !

Edited @ 6:59AM 10/24/07

(0) » REPLY «#14. ELCrazy @ 9:40AM 10/24/07
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I think there's still too much text. :(

(0) » REPLY «#15. Vengeance @ 11:56AM 10/24/07
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make the text bigger so it fills up more of the back and give it a cool font. It's still too long... look at the official back, most summaries are usually like 2 or 3 lines long.

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