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Version 2 added on 02/09/08 by Omega-fudgetroid
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(0) » REPLY «#2. KheartsKing @ 8:35PM 02/08/08
[re: v1] | i didnt know it was a walpaper so nice job! 4/5 maybe fill in the nintendo logo? |
(0) » REPLY «#3. Omega-fudgetroid @ 8:36PM 02/08/08
[re: v1] | #2, Like a glow or something? Or maybe make it white... And also, the wallpaper is just the picture. I've done all the colour arrangements and effects. Edited @ 8:37PM 02/08/08 |
(0) » REPLY «#4. KheartsKing @ 8:39PM 02/08/08
[re: v1] | it looks great and fill it with white maybe? Edited @ 8:40PM 02/08/08 |
(0) » REPLY «#5. Omega-fudgetroid @ 8:41PM 02/08/08
[re: v1] | #4, Okay, might do that tomorrow. Here in Sweden it's 2:41 am so I'm veery tired... :/ |
(0) » REPLY «#6. DrDoomsday @ 8:58PM 02/08/08
 [re: v1] | I like it, but the front is too blurry for my liking. |
(0) » REPLY «#7. Omega-fudgetroid @ 8:59PM 02/08/08
[re: v1] | #6, I wanted the main part of the front to be more of the center of attention. |
(0) » REPLY «#8. Cerium 
@ 9:05PM 02/08/08
[re: v1] | I like the front. The back doesn't seem very official looking though. |
(0) » REPLY «#9. linnus @ 9:59PM 02/08/08
[re: v1] | I also like the front. But try to take the underline off in the back. Edited @ 10:00PM 02/08/08 |
(0) » REPLY «#10. Vengeance @ 6:21AM 02/09/08
[re: v1] | i really like it, good job. here are some pointers: -try and enlarge the image on the front so it takes up more space -get a nintendo logo with white inside it -add a rating on the back (probably in the bottom left corner) -add a couple more screenshots if possible -remove the underline on the text 4/5 so far. nice job! |
(0) » REPLY «#11. Omega-fudgetroid @ 6:23AM 02/09/08
[re: v1] | Thanks for all the good critique. I'll see if I will change it during the day. |
(0) » REPLY «#12. Omega-fudgetroid @ 7:13AM 02/09/08
[re: v1] | #10, According to all of my DS boxes laying here beside me, there is not supposed to be ratings on the back. And if I would remove the lines under the text, they would look sporadically placed in the air. By using the lines, it feels like the back have a solid base everything is built upon. Edited @ 7:14AM 02/09/08 |
(0) » REPLY «#13. Omega-fudgetroid @ 10:10AM 02/09/08
[re: v2] | Updated in the places I agreed in. The rest I keep the same. |
(0) » REPLY «#14. Vengeance @ 10:11AM 02/09/08
[re: v2] | well, you might as well put SOMETHING in that black space... anyway, good update. 4.5/5 |
(0) » REPLY «#15. Omega-fudgetroid @ 10:13AM 02/09/08
[re: v2] | #14, I want that black space... Feels more intruding, which enlightens the younger Link's courage shining. The box must show the darkness and the thing that's holding it back. That's also why I enlighted the yellow pillar in the middle. |
(0) » REPLY «#16. Vengeance @ 10:21AM 02/09/08
[re: v2] | #15, yeah, well... it's just part of the template... it doesn't really need to match (or contrast) the actual image. but whatever, do what you want with it. |
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