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Version 2 added on 03/11/08 by Maybe Tomorrow
Favorite this Author (must be logged in to use)Earlier Versions: Version 1 (03/10/08)
Add Box to Favorites (must be logged in to use)Fav'd By (9): ELCrazy
, xIAMHUNTERx 
, IceFox 
, MugglesMan111 , Destroyer 
, dark_raider , Saint 
, Copperhead 
, ~KG~ Comments
(0) » REPLY «#4. Copperhead @ 9:36PM 03/10/08
[re: v1] | I think the back is a bit plain, but the box is still very, very nice. |
(0) » REPLY «#5. Maybe Tomorrow @ 9:38PM 03/10/08
[re: v1] | I was trying to make this one a little more plain than my others. |
(0) » REPLY «#6. TrevOwnz @ 10:28PM 03/10/08
[re: v1] | Looks great but i think the left side on the back needs another character or something. |
(0) » REPLY «#7. Floopy 
@ 10:55PM 03/10/08
[re: v1] | I really kind hate the back. I don't like the description because it's just a quote from Marcus Fenix from the trailer, and I don't like the font choice. I also don't like the placement and it just needs more to it than a Locust and some red. |
(0) » REPLY «#8. Saint @ 11:09PM 03/10/08
[re: v1] | Nice, but the back is kind of plain. I laugh at noobs that give critique liek they're LK's Mentor. Anyway, nice box. Add some one's body in that blank space, so you can see only their head. |
(0) » REPLY «#10. Mad Spike 
@ 3:12AM 03/11/08
[re: v2] | I don't like gears here. They are too clean and too bevel and emboss, you know. I think they should be more dark and rusty or something with texture. They don't suit to the whole style... Also I think you should add more details to the back. Some characters or text to cover the giant EMPTY (real empty) spaces. I usualy use quotes or awards or something like that - I think they would looks great at this box ;) What do think? o.O |
(0) » REPLY «#11. Maybe Tomorrow @ 9:49AM 03/11/08
[re: v2] | #10, You mean the screenshot gears? How could you possibly say those are clean? I made them look scratched up and bloody. And does nobody understand that I was trying to keep this as a simple box? |
(0) » REPLY «#12. Mad Spike @ 9:56AM 03/11/08
[re: v2] | #11, Looks like they are white or bright gray with some dark gray inner glow inside. they should be dark. Cos those gears are the most brightful part of the box. |
(0) » REPLY «#13. Maybe Tomorrow @ 10:06AM 03/11/08
[re: v2] | #12, I'm pretty sure Brightful isn't a word. If you look around, I'm sure you can find something brighter than my screenshot borders. Ex: The text all over the place. The logo. There needs to be some contrast. My whole box can't be a deep red color. |
(0) » REPLY «#14. Mad Spike @ 10:08AM 03/11/08
[re: v2] | #13, I am sure that the Brightful is the right word. Well, I told my opinion. I think gears texture is the weak point of the box. |
(0) » REPLY «#17. ELCrazy @ 11:36AM 03/11/08
[re: v2] | I think the front is so kick-ass, but I feel the text shouldn't have a Drop Shadow. |
(0) » REPLY «#18. Maybe Tomorrow @ 3:07PM 03/11/08
[re: v2] | #16, heh. #17, I tried it without a drop shadow, and it didn't look right. |
(0) » REPLY «#19. Maybe Tomorrow @ 5:26PM 03/11/08
[re: v2] | Damn. I really thought this was good enough for the HoF. |
(0) » REPLY «#20. ELCrazy @ 7:37PM 03/11/08
[re: v2] | Seeing the enormous effort you put in, here's a fave on the house ;) |
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[re: v1]
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