#2, Nah, they just both went to Sonic Style, got a bunch of renders, and pasted them on a background. Well, not terrible for a first. You should have used a different canvas, as the temp blends into it. Bowser and Eggman don't have feet, the glow on Mario is too strong and the ESRB logo is too small. But, after all, you didn't do any of the rendering yourself, so I can't blame you, can I?
#2, He used the same poster that was used on that box and I don't think he should have, simply because the logos do not work well for example the top one being cut off and the overlapping rating. It's not working very well.
this is my first ever box so its not that great but i guess its a start
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Looks very simlar to this:
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#2, Nah, they just both went to Sonic Style, got a bunch of renders, and pasted them on a background. Well, not terrible for a first. You should have used a different canvas, as the temp blends into it. Bowser and Eggman don't have feet, the glow on Mario is too strong and the ESRB logo is too small. But, after all, you didn't do any of the rendering yourself, so I can't blame you, can I?
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#2, He used the same poster that was used on that box and I don't think he should have, simply because the logos do not work well for example the top one being cut off and the overlapping rating. It's not working very well.
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#3 thanks for the advice
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Not terrible for a first, its just that the artwork is to long to fit on the temp.
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yeah, its my first one so i still have to get the hang of it but i'll try to fix that stuff for my next box.
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good fave
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this is a great box for a first, much better than mine!
whatever you did with this, do it again, make a better brawl box
for a first box, amazing! 5/5 +fav
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#9 wow thanks! thanks for the fav!
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