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Version 2 added on 06/20/08 by LoveKuja
Earlier Versions: Version 1 (06/20/08)
Fav'd By (38): ELCrazy
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[re: v1] | It has, welcome back :). The front is good, it actually sort of has a collecter's edition feel. But don't make it collecter's edition, it's great this way. The back has a lot, seems crowded, but is lacking at the same time. Lacking more of a summary, screenshot text, I think altogether in the back there are WAY too many screenshots, you have like 7-8 in total. I'd suggest getting rid of about 4 screenshots, because surley you don't need that much, and to add more text. Great job, though. 3.9/5 +fav |
[re: v1] | Nice come back. :D One thing is bothering me, that white space above the text on the back, maybe add some more text, or make it a tad bigger, and move it up. |
[re: v1] | #2, #6, I was in quite a pinch with the back. It would have looked a lot better without any text at all actually. I thought that I'd put some large text there as usual, but later noticed that a bigger text would cover Xianghua's and/or Kilik's face. The current text is definitely not good enough. Oh dear, I've never been that good when it comes to text and boxarts. I'm going to try moving the text I have now upwards, and then adding some desrciption text below. Little correction to #2's post, there are only six screenshots in the back. Thanks for all the comments, I am glad of all this positiveness. Any ideas of styles for the text would be very welcome (I am not feeling quite secure about the white text with black borders). |
[re: v1] | Damn that's nice, i'm looking forward to seeing the update. |
[re: v1] | sweet, sadly i have a ps3 and am stuck with vader nice work +fav |
[re: v1] | Yay, you finally made another box! Awesome job. :D |
[re: v2] | Haha, thanks guys. Ok, v2 is go. I had to scrap the idea from my previous post as it would have taken too much space. Though I think this way it is better. Added the requested printable aswell. So are the changes any good? |
[re: v2] | The front is sweet!, the back is a bit wild :p |
[re: v2] | ours are opposites of each other. Haha anyways, very good. |
[re: v2] | Yeah, we are totally following Namco's marketing ideas, haha. |
[re: v2] | Nice one(s). ;] Let's see if anyone gets that. :P |
[re: v2] | #20, ...lame :P Anyways, Kuja, two words: kick ass. And lol, it is wierd that yours and Techne's are the complete opposites of each others. |
[re: v2] | Oo yay, happy happy! Thank you everyone. #20, initially I thought you were talking about Techne's and my box, but since you said that there is something to get, I'd say you are talking about Sophitia's breasts. |
[re: v2] | #8 yeah sometimes a box doesn't need text, it's great the way it is. But still maybe a little too much screenshots? Idk, but it's a great box! |
[re: v2] | They're all busty...not a bad thing :D |
[re: v2] | awesome, great inclusion of yoda and fav box and author |
[re: v2] | Nice box, but I think Sigfreid should be on it, and Yoda should be less transparent. 3.5/5 Edited @ 7:05PM 12/24/08 |
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