Welcome to the site, chaoscontrol23. Well, for a first, It's pretty bad. What program are you using? That might affect the box. Here are some improvements. First off, the Nintendo DS template is smashed. Find a better one. Second, never use screen shots as backgrounds for your boxes. They make them look cheap. Not only that, but the one you used bled through the template! Put some detail into it next time. Third, the renders of Shadow, Silver and Sonic are incredibly too blurry. They were poorly cut out as well, as if no effort was put into it. Fourth, the quality of those dev logos suck. Literally. They suck. Try finding higher quality ones. By the way, the Sega logo isn't cut out. Fifth, the main logo is horrible. I know you specifically told us to overlook it, but that was a hard thing to do, since the blurriness of it was too distracting. Overall, if I were to give it a rating, it would most likely be a one point five out of five. Do you use paint? If so, get photoshop. It's ten times better, and besides. There's a hell of a lot more features on there. Good luck, and I hope those tips helped. Once again, welcome to the site. Enjoy your stay! I hope you become a better BoxArtist in the near future. ;)
-Chibi Cloud
EDIT: Holy shit... I didn't think my comment would be this long.
#12, thx for the "extensive" help- ive been looking for a new program to use...i just wanted to get one up- it was kinda a quickie. i'll probably redo it.
#15, No, a Sonic Brawl box whit that Sega logo and that screenchot as background. This Box!
I thought I'd seen it here on VGBoxart but apearantly its just my brain being strange, 'couse I've felt so about many boxes here before.
#18, yeah, now i found it.
It probably so.
But I've still seen boxes before they gou uploaded, that I thougt I had commented on too.
But its probably dejá vú or something...
first box... please give constructive criticism!
by the way, i know that the brawl logo is poorly cut, overlook it. :)
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Ive seen this before.
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you have? where?
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dunno
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well... i didnt, and this was completely my idea- if anyone thinks i stole it from them, sorry. no intention.
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anyway, do you like it?
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#5, link!/?replies=31
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#7: oooooohhhh. thanks
dont kno why, but when i looked up sonic brawl, nothing came up...
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#8 when i searched sonic brawl, about 500 results came up.
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#9, i meant when i was submitting it for the title it wasnt in the database- i dunno
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#10, not for the DS maybe.
But I've seen this before... :/
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Welcome to the site, chaoscontrol23. Well, for a first, It's pretty bad. What program are you using? That might affect the box. Here are some improvements. First off, the Nintendo DS template is smashed. Find a better one. Second, never use screen shots as backgrounds for your boxes. They make them look cheap. Not only that, but the one you used bled through the template! Put some detail into it next time. Third, the renders of Shadow, Silver and Sonic are incredibly too blurry. They were poorly cut out as well, as if no effort was put into it. Fourth, the quality of those dev logos suck. Literally. They suck. Try finding higher quality ones. By the way, the Sega logo isn't cut out. Fifth, the main logo is horrible. I know you specifically told us to overlook it, but that was a hard thing to do, since the blurriness of it was too distracting. Overall, if I were to give it a rating, it would most likely be a one point five out of five. Do you use paint? If so, get photoshop. It's ten times better, and besides. There's a hell of a lot more features on there. Good luck, and I hope those tips helped. Once again, welcome to the site. Enjoy your stay! I hope you become a better BoxArtist in the near future. ;)
-Chibi Cloud
EDIT: Holy shit... I didn't think my comment would be this long.
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#12.... lol. This is ok for a first, but th bg is a level from SA2
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#13, yea, it is... how did you know?;P
#12, thx for the "extensive" help- ive been looking for a new program to use...i just wanted to get one up- it was kinda a quickie. i'll probably redo it.
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#2, sonic heros 2 or 1
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#15, No, a Sonic Brawl box whit that Sega logo and that screenchot as background. This Box!
I thought I'd seen it here on VGBoxart but apearantly its just my brain being strange, 'couse I've felt so about many boxes here before.
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#16, ok...
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#16, in the forums. Critique thread possibly? He had this in the forums. XD
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#16, Maybe DISCOMANIAC's sonic the hedgehog box? :P
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#18, yeah, now i found it.
It probably so.
But I've still seen boxes before they gou uploaded, that I thougt I had commented on too.
But its probably dejá vú or something...
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-claps-...Not bad...Chaos, except...MINE'S ORIGINAL AND YOURS IS A STEAL! Oh well...
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