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Version 2 added on 01/11/09 by Drew1245
Earlier Versions: Version 1 (12/10/08)
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[re: v1] | this should be under (MICS) becuase it's says 720, nto 360. nto bad for a first, but make the lobo pope more, it's kind of small. Also add a back description. Get a real esrb. 4/5 for a first Edited @ 7:37PM 12/10/08 |
[re: v1] | I can easily tell you put a lot of effort into this, but collectively the design comes off as being very "computery". Theres to many extreme effects on many of the elements in the design, and I don't quite get the sunburst gradient lines tying the screenshots together. |
[re: v1] | #2, I had a real ESRB i edited it to make it more unique because my teacher said the more original or unique it is the better grade. |
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[re: v1]
Edited @ 4:15PM 12/10/08