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Version 2 added on 03/16/09 by vjmaster90
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(0) » REPLY «#2. vjmaster90 @ 10:13AM 03/16/09
[re: v1] | :(.................. This took me three days. |
(0) » REPLY «#3. coolguy753 
@ 10:16AM 03/16/09
[re: v1] | Ok well the idea isn't too bad and you've executed it reasonably well but on the front the ea logo doesn't look good. On the back I think the screenshot borders are too cartoony for such a grungy and sci-fi game. Also the text for tagline and summary and quotes all looks very plain. |
(0) » REPLY «#5. Pan 
@ 1:53PM 03/16/09
[re: v2] | Front's OK, but you really should fund better placement for the screens on back, and redo the text with some more style to fit the game better. |
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[re: v1]
Tell me how I can improve.
Credit to qwerty334.
Edited @ 10:45PM 03/15/09