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Version 3 added on 07/28/09 by MugglesMan111
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(0) » REPLY «#3. GlowBlue @ 6:39AM 07/28/09
[re: v1] | I like the concept but the typography on the cover does not run parallel to the lines of color you've created. I find that pretty distracting. |
(0) » REPLY «#8. MugglesMan111 @ 1:07PM 07/28/09
[re: v1] | In reply to the unparallel parts i actually did that on purpose. Because as you go down the cover it gets crooked to show the crooked world. :P. I know, I'm so deep, and that's not whats he said. |
(0) » REPLY «#9. Death @ 1:19PM 07/28/09
[re: v1] | Well, #8, that being said i still think it dosent look right |
(0) » REPLY «#10. GlowBlue @ 1:27PM 07/28/09
[re: v1] | #8, I understand if you want to do that, but the tilt should be more pronounced then. As it is now it appears sloppy rather than intended. Since you've created these very straight lines for your text to live in, the viewer's eye expects the text to follow the same plane. If you're going to mess with that expectation, that's okay, but you have to show that it's very deliberate by creating an invisible intersecting line that the text can follow and align all of your "crazy" text parallel to it. It's controlled chaos, but it's good design. |
(0) » REPLY «#11. MugglesMan111 @ 1:41PM 07/28/09
[re: v3] | #10 yeah i understand. I decided to change it up completely now, but I like it. |
(0) » REPLY «#12. Nerdysimmer @ 10:48PM 07/29/09
[re: v3] | Very nice and simplistic monochromatic look. |
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