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Version 2 added on 11/08/09 by Ayron
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Add Box to Favorites (must be logged in to use)Fav'd By (41): MARKER
, ELCrazy 
, jevangod 
, Drakxxx 
, hsoldier 
, TwilightMystics , XCore , IceFox 
, sd1833 , Apollo , HalfSwiss 
, Hawt Es , Spiderpig24 , master_general , paper sonic , spypilot , Moogle , super-mega-hyper-sonic , Reza , Geno , Death 
, billyman31 , Chibi Cloud , RoarShark , crazyjp , Karma , Sarashi , GameGuy360 , axel_master , oxol 
, Venom1 , ojoe2000 , Lestat_the_vampire , coolguy753 
, Tucker1140 , davidun , mchapra 
, AlEx-NiNt3Nd0 , Destiny 
, del337er 
, mabik 
Comments
(0) » REPLY «#3. axel_master @ 9:47AM 11/07/09
[re: v1] | Woah man, This is great! I love your drawing style, which tablet do you use? |
(0) » REPLY «#4. Ayron @ 9:49AM 11/07/09
[re: v1] | #2, You still don't have me as a fav author ;) #3, I'm using a trust TB-5300 Slimline Design Tablet,thank you =D. Thanks for favs/comments everyone :D! |
(0) » REPLY «#9. RoarShark @ 1:41PM 11/07/09
[re: v1] | Honestly that back is horrible, the front is fantastic though. The back just is missing something that would make it fantastic |
(0) » REPLY «#10. Ayron @ 1:43PM 11/07/09
[re: v1] | #9, i'm sorry you don't like it.. but it's hard to take you seriously with that avatar. Thanks everyone. |
(0) » REPLY «#11. RoarShark @ 1:47PM 11/07/09
[re: v1] | #10, Yeah thats why I am using it. Maybe add something to the back another render(pic) what every to make it have something else to it. |
(0) » REPLY «#12. Chibi Cloud @ 2:54PM 11/07/09
[re: v1] | That is quite amazing!!! =D Awesome work, Sander. =) |
(0) » REPLY «#13. coolguy753 @ 3:11PM 11/07/09
[re: v1] | #9, At least back that ridiculous statement up. Awesome work dude. |
(0) » REPLY «#15. Drakxxx @ 4:14PM 11/07/09
[re: v1] | Excellent job Ayron! I apologize for not checking out your WIP on this. I would have loved to have seen this in progress, but I have been swamped with freelance stuff recently, which is both a blessing and a curse. I love the creativity, and the sketches really do personify the whole Bioshock concept a lot. Edited @ 4:15PM 11/07/09 |
(0) » REPLY «#16. Karma @ 4:23PM 11/07/09
[re: v1] | Awesome, awesome, awesome. Thank you for considering my suggestions :) |
(0) » REPLY «#17. RoarShark @ 9:36PM 11/07/09
[re: v1] | #13, Horrible is an overstatement, bad or unappealing is the proper thing I should have said. The reason I think that is because It is plain and honestly boring. If it were any other user, no one would like the back, but because it is Ayron, or a blue rank, or high ranking user every one loves the back. It is missing something that would pull it together like a big daddy, or little sister, or even a splicer just to complement the front, which is amazing. But obviously it my opinion. Edited @ 10:15PM 11/07/09 |
(0) » REPLY «#19. Ayron @ 1:35AM 11/08/09
[re: v1] | #17, I find that statement horribly offensive roarshark. I'm not one to be judged by rank, and I've always acted as everyone else. Thanks everyone. Edited @ 1:50AM 11/08/09 |
(0) » REPLY «#20. TwilightMystics @ 2:55AM 11/08/09
[re: v1] | Ayron, I have to say this again. I love the idea, and you executed it quite fantastically. personally I had something different in mind with back, but this is another interpretation of my idea for the back, and it works quite well. Also how you made the edges of the slipcover is really cool, and not so plain as before! Overall I give you a 9/10, and I have to fav+ this box. |
(0) » REPLY «#21. RoarShark @ 8:09AM 11/08/09
[re: v1] | #19, It is nothing against you and I apologize If I have offended you, not was not what I was trying to do, and you have never acted like you are superior, I was just pointing out that some members look at the artist rank rather than box its self. again Its just my opinion that no one else shares except me. Edited @ 8:18AM 11/08/09 |
(0) » REPLY «#22. Ayron @ 8:56AM 11/08/09
[re: v1] | #20, I understand.. this is just my personal touch to your concept :D! #21, I believe i misunderstood. My apologies. |
(0) » REPLY «#23. Ervo @ 10:57AM 11/08/09
[re: v1] | There's somethign i don't like in the back, can't put my finger on it... But the front looks great, very well done! |
(0) » REPLY «#25. MARKER @ 2:54PM 11/08/09
[re: v1] | Sure is different! LOL ---- I really like the front with all the writing and drawings etc. I think the back could have been better, and I think you should have stuck to the front "look".. filling in all the black spaces with strange writing. Nice job however, and certainly strange ;) |
(0) » REPLY «#26. Ayron @ 3:17PM 11/08/09
[re: v2] | Update! Due to Onn's marvelous idea, I got 'round to updating the back. Hope it looks better now. |
(0) » REPLY «#27. RoarShark @ 3:31PM 11/08/09
[re: v2] | #26, Not to sound like a hypocrite, but that back looks so much better now. And its so much better that... +fav. Edited @ 3:31PM 11/08/09 |
(0) » REPLY «#28. Hawt Es @ 5:08PM 11/08/09
[re: v2] | lol, roarshark... anyways, I like what you have going and I get what you are going for but, I feel it could have been pulled off better. The back looks uneven to the front and there are a lot of other fonts out there that are better, that you could have used. really solid cover overall! |
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[re: v1]
I've been working on this box for a little more than a week, and this is probably one of my highest efforts up to date.
The concept is very simple. I wanted it to look as if a little sister schribbled/doodled on a piece of paper for the front, and for the back I wanted to make it look as if an 'little' sister who has been in rapture for some time started drawing big daddy's on the wall.
As you may have noticed, i wanted to express the fear so obviously visible in Bioshock, only from a little sister's point-of-view.
This was going to be my fall-party box, but as the date isn't set, i just had to post this.
Thanks ALOT to everyone who commented on my WIP thread,and special thanks to Ziggy for critique/inspiration,Jack for being supportive and Dan for helping me with some fonts =]!
I know i'm no Drakxxx, so my drawings are nowhere near good, but i enjoyed the process nonetheless.
Enjoy!