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Version 2 added on 11/13/09 by jayhog
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sonicwii
Add Box to Favorites (must be logged in to use)Fav'd By (17): Silent Oblivion
, spypilot 
, tmrd , Sonic the Hedgehog , super-mega-hyper-sonic , Manuel_Alejandro95 , Delicious1 
, makjack , YOYO , del337er , AB501UT3 Z3R0 
, TwistRox , YellowYoshi127 , mailtoad , slimd1995 , Glaedr 
, mystery bandit 
Comments
(0) » REPLY «#2. Delicious1 @ 4:04PM 11/13/09
[re: v1] | Really nice box, especially the back. A few suggestions: You need a higher res logo on the front. You should put a reflection of Sonic on the floor he's standing on, that floor looks super reflective. The presentation is waaaaay off. Way way way way way way too much free space around your box. But the box itself is real nice. |
(0) » REPLY «#3. jayhog @ 4:07PM 11/13/09
[re: v1] | #2, Thanks! I didnt realise how much freespace there was until I uploaded it actually lol. And I'll be sure to update with the suggestions you've give because they're all great :) |
(0) » REPLY «#4. Manuel_Alejandro95 @ 4:12PM 11/13/09
[re: v1] | The only thing I don't like is that the color scheme of the front isn't the same of the back... |
(0) » REPLY «#5. jayhog @ 4:28PM 11/13/09
[re: v2] | Update, less empty space and reflection of sonic on the floor. I needed to get rid of the empty space quick, I really didnt like it lol. #4, Yeah I thought that at first but then I thought some professional boxes dont have matching color schemes on the front and back, so I might aswell give it a shot of non-matching, but the themes fit, so I think it works. |
(0) » REPLY «#6. mystery bandit @ 4:43PM 11/13/09
[re: v2] | I love the back, the front is awesome too. Favourited. |
(0) » REPLY «#7. tmrd @ 6:13PM 11/13/09
[re: v2] | Yayy :D I love getting credit for things ;) Great box, move sonic's reflection up a bit so that the point of his shoe is touching the point of the shoes reflection. Otherwise, awesome! +fav :D |
(0) » REPLY «#8. Sonic the Hedgehog @ 8:20PM 11/13/09
[re: v2] | Not bad. I'm glad I was able to inspire you. ;) |
(0) » REPLY «#10. YellowYoshi127 @ 11:50PM 11/13/09
[re: v2] | Really, really good. Your rank 4 box definetly!! |
(0) » REPLY «#12. jayhog @ 5:28AM 11/14/09
[re: v2] | Thanks guys for all the favs #7, Ill update when others suggest improvements. I almost forgot to say thanks to you for helping me with all of my designs! Thanks TMRD (A little extra credit for you :)) #10, I hope it gets me to rank 4! :) |
(0) » REPLY «#13. Silent Oblivion @ 6:46AM 11/14/09
[re: v2] | Cool, though I dislike the presentation. |
(0) » REPLY «#14. Sir Tobbii @ 10:19AM 11/14/09
[re: v2] | Front is very nice. But the back could use some work, the text feels very plain and the screenshot placement feels strange. |
(0) » REPLY «#15. jayhog @ 4:09PM 11/14/09
[re: v2] | Wow! S_O fav'd my work O.o #13, I wasn't too sure about it either, but I couldn't really think about anything else to have it as. #14, You mean like a glow or something maybe or a bevel and emboss? Let me know what you think it should have so I can change and make it look better lol. |
(0) » REPLY «#16. dpmm07 @ 5:43PM 11/14/09
[re: v2] | Not bad. I highly dislike the presentation though. I hate it when people go overboard with presentation, (I don't directly mean this to you) It's less distracting when the presentation is simpler to me. Also the front and back look completely different. The front has kind of a brownish color scheme, and the back is like blue. |
(0) » REPLY «#17. Delicious1 @ 9:13AM 11/15/09
[re: v2] | I didn't notice that you updated this, but now that you have I think it looks great! You get a fav from me. |
(0) » REPLY «#18. jayhog @ 9:46AM 11/15/09
[re: v2] | Wow I didnt think this would do better than my Sega Superstars tennis :) And to everyone who commented on the presentation, I'm working on different presentations that I could keep for a while, guess this won't be one of them lol. |
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