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Version 2 added on 11/20/09 by YellowYoshi127
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, LaserSonic1029 , jayhog 
, SilverCrust 
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(0) » REPLY «#2. jayhog @ 1:25PM 11/18/09
[re: v1] | Pretty cool! I would make the text on the back stand out a bit more with a black stroke or a drop shadow. Fav :) |
(0) » REPLY «#3. YellowYoshi127 @ 1:34PM 11/18/09
[re: v1] | Thanx! I tried the font in black but it sunk into the shadows of the leaves and the trunk. Thanx for your tips! Hopefully this will be my rank 4 box if enough people fav ;) Edited @ 1:35PM 11/18/09 |
(0) » REPLY «#4. jayhog @ 1:58PM 11/18/09
[re: v1] | Also I think Baby Mario is covering some of the text. #3, Just a black outline on the red text would do I think :) Edited @ 1:58PM 11/18/09 |
(0) » REPLY «#5. SilverCrust @ 2:02PM 11/18/09
[re: v1] | I don't like the back, but the front is awesome! Work on the text and screenshots on the back. |
(0) » REPLY «#6. YellowYoshi127 @ 10:15AM 11/19/09
[re: v1] | #5, OK thanx, i'll fix that , worth a fav? ;) |
(0) » REPLY «#7. tleeart 
@ 10:54AM 11/19/09
[re: v1] | The back is too text heavy and there are quite a few grammar/spelling errors. Also, the red text doesn't work for me. Try using white with the drop shadow/stroke people have been mentioning and try to pull together or edit more screenshots. It's a cute idea. The execution of the idea is a little weak, though. |
(0) » REPLY «#8. tmrd 
@ 11:09AM 11/19/09
[re: v1] | The front cover is great! The text on the back should be white with a black dropshadow/stroke and there should be more screenshots. So the front is great, but the back needs work :D |
(0) » REPLY «#11. YellowYoshi127 @ 10:47AM 11/20/09
[re: v2] | I have updated the box, now with a better back with better text and more screenshots. Please fav if you like. |
(0) » REPLY «#13. YellowYoshi127 @ 12:09PM 11/20/09
[re: v2] | #12, thanx is it better now? Congrats on rank 7!!! |
(0) » REPLY «#14. SilverCrust @ 12:44PM 11/20/09
[re: v2] | Looks great now! I will fav, but can you change Baby Mario? It looks like he's floating. |
(0) » REPLY «#15. YellowYoshi127 @ 1:00PM 11/20/09
[re: v2] | #14, Thanx, baby marios ot really floating more drowning... |
(0) » REPLY «#17. YellowYoshi127 @ 1:39PM 11/20/09
[re: v2] | #16, Thanx, havent figured out how to get them closer to the writning yet.. Damn Elements 7, its so damn complicated.... |
(0) » REPLY «#18. LaserSonic1029 @ 5:01PM 11/20/09
[re: v2] | The front is great!! but the back needs a little work the screen shots look like artworks insted of screenshot |
(0) » REPLY «#19. YellowYoshi127 @ 3:23AM 11/21/09
[re: v2] | #15 thanx!! I couldn't really find any shots that looked beachy and with yoshi. I ll search again tonight. Thanx! |
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[re: v1]
Tmrd for the userlogo
Paper Sonic for the game logo
And jevan for the temp.