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(0) » REPLY «#2. LnknPrkDude 
@ 5:14AM 08/26/06
[re: v1] | I would suggest using a Halo logo that is better cut out, and use a different font for "Arbiter Stories", i recommend the font "Hanzel"...also, the Microsoft Gaming Studios logo has a white square around it...and one last thing, if it were at all possible, use a better background, but i doubt it is possible considering the lack of Arbiter images on the net. I am not criticising, I am just trying to help you out, good idea by the way...:D |
(0) » REPLY «#3. treesquirrel12 
@ 10:03AM 08/26/06
[re: v1] | its a little bright and alls i see wrong is the halo logo needing to be cropped, the box around the MS logo, and the arbiter logo needing a new font. otherwise its an ok box. 3/5 |
(0) » REPLY «#4. hawaiian_dragon @ 12:41PM 08/26/06
 [re: v1] | Hmmm...the Arbiter pic is blurry, I don't like the font, and the box around the Microsoft Game Studios logo is not too great. 2.5/5 |
(0) » REPLY «#5. Mist 
@ 3:34PM 08/26/06
[re: v1] | "Arbiter Stories" needs to be changed to something more believeable... |
(0) » REPLY «#6. HALO 32 @ 4:47PM 08/26/06
[re: v2] | huh...i dont have the font Hanzel im looking for a better image (yea i know its blurry) i got rid of the box around the MS logo and any suggestions for a diffrint titles besides "Arbiter Stories" would be nice :) |
(0) » REPLY «#7. LnknPrkDude @ 5:43PM 08/26/06
[re: v2] | "The First Zealot", "The Chronicles of the Arbiter", "The History of the Arbiter", "The Legend of the Arbiter", "The Myth of the Arbiter"... just thrwoing ideas out there, and as for an image, here's one that you might have to crop a little bit... link |
(0) » REPLY «#8. LnknPrkDude @ 5:45PM 08/26/06
[re: v2] | and here is the Halo logo I would use if I were you, just right click and save it. Its a "PNG" file... link |
(0) » REPLY «#9. Mist @ 5:48PM 08/26/06
[re: v2] | "Halo: The Arbiter's Legion" or "Halo: The Legion of the Arbiter". Just ideas... |
(0) » REPLY «#10. Radioactive Bob @ 6:06PM 08/26/06
[re: v2] | "Halo: The True Heritic" Just an idea... |
(0) » REPLY «#11. pacokorn77 
@ 7:53PM 08/26/06
[re: v2] | The picture #7 threw your way, I'd definitely use that. That's awesome. Really don't know any fonts you could use (never made a box, as you tell). For a name, keep Halo as the main title, of course, but as for ideas: "Arbiter's Journey" and "The Heretic's Beginning" are just two that come to mind. |
(0) » REPLY «#12. MassacreMonk 
@ 3:03AM 08/27/06
[re: v2] | Change the font of Arbiter Stories and/or even the name like everyone suggests. |
(0) » REPLY «#13. namdorgekaj @ 3:01PM 11/19/06
[re: v2] | use the pic that #7 gave you and as for a title, dont use anything saying he's a heratic, the whole Halo 2 game hes trying to prove that hes not a heratic us sumthing like "the history of the arbiter" or "the legend of the arbiter" that #7 also suggested |
(0) » REPLY «#14. steve7702 @ 12:31PM 07/08/07
[re: v2] | this would be a sweet psp game if its anything like gta. that would be cool. Halo 3:GTA |
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[re: v1]
but i know it isnt that great so any suggestions whould be great and appriciated