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Version 2 added on 11/24/06 by treesquirrel12
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(0) » REPLY «#2. werdney 
@ 4:35PM 11/24/06
[re: v1] | Bungies making a new FPS? AWESOME!! This is very good. The only thing I don't like is the MIA part of the front title. The colors seem too bright. If it's supposed to be USA colors or something, the A should be more blue. 4.5/5 |
(0) » REPLY «#3. treesquirrel12 @ 4:41PM 11/24/06
[re: v1] | #2, I so hope you are being sarcastic about this being a real game... anyway i worked real hard on the logo and they aren't supposed to be red, white, and blue but i will try to darken the M so they all kinda fit. |
(0) » REPLY «#4. werdney @ 4:43PM 11/24/06
[re: v1] | Yeah, I was being sarcastic. And I love the shape of the logo and it's positioning, I just think it's too light. |
(0) » REPLY «#5. MuffinKiller 
@ 4:43PM 11/24/06
[re: v1] | Wow that would be a kickass game especially if it was made by bungie you should be a game desighner or something.....4/5 because of the MIA on the logo. |
(0) » REPLY «#6. Radioactive Bob 
@ 4:44PM 11/24/06
[re: v1] | Quiet a few problems really. 1) no pics on the back 2) the logo seems too colorful on a dark cover 3) a lot of things on the fron and back seem blurry. 3.5/5 sorry. |
(0) » REPLY «#7. HellKnight @ 4:51PM 11/24/06
[re: v1] | 2 things i see wrong, if the year is 1920 why the is the guy on the back wearing tactical recon armour :P and second 'nowhere', in the context you are using it in is one word. |
(0) » REPLY «#8. treesquirrel12 @ 5:41PM 11/24/06
[re: v1] | #7, hmmmm good point i'll change the spelling error and the year, make the M a darker shade of blue #6, what exactly is blurry??? |
(0) » REPLY «#9. Radioactive Bob @ 5:43PM 11/24/06
[re: v1] | #8, the text on the front is blurry, and the back picture seems smudged a little bit. |
(0) » REPLY «#10. treesquirrel12 @ 5:47PM 11/24/06
[re: v1] | #9, well the guy on the back was very lighted and hard to see so i screwed around with the levels of it to darken it but i'll put the orginial pick and darken it using the light/dark meter and i'll sharpen up that logo |
(0) » REPLY «#12. werdney @ 7:32PM 11/24/06
[re: v2] | A lot better now with the logo. 5/5 because it had to be hard to get a made up game box together. |
(0) » REPLY «#13. treesquirrel12 @ 10:50PM 11/24/06
[re: v2] | ok then.... which one of you yellow bellies rated this box a 1/5 >_> <_< i'm watching you |
(0) » REPLY «#14. Radioactive Bob @ 10:55PM 11/24/06
[re: v2] | i just realized, this game's year takes place the same time as Perfect Dark Zero! 0_0 LAWSUIT! |
(0) » REPLY «#15. finalfantaseer22 
@ 10:56PM 11/24/06
[re: v2] | did my 4 make up for it? i think its a good idea, but it doesnt come together. the colors for the logo are wierd, and i dont like the quotes on the front. |
(0) » REPLY «#16. dark_raider 
@ 2:04AM 11/25/06
[re: v2] | I really dislike the HUGE "MIA" logo, its really distracting, quotes on the front arent that good, and you need screens on the back...I know its hard to find screens for a made up game, but Ive made a few fake games and Im able to find something useful.EX. my Quarantine box has two screens from Resistence, but they are manipulated a bit to show some distinction. Another way to make screens is to get real life pictures and use filters to make them look cartoonish or otherwise gamelike. |
(0) » REPLY «#17. dark_raider @ 2:06AM 11/25/06
[re: v2] | P.S. I also would suggest not to have Bungie as the Developer, you should use Infinity Ward or something... |
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